This essay package includes 10 essay documents.

Each document contains :

• The original essay by the student.

• Sam’s correction of the essay, including corrections of errors, suggestions for better language, explanations for the changes made, band scores and overall comments.

• The final version of the essay after all the corrections and suggestions.

The original essays are all either band 6.0. or 6.5., and the final versions of each essay are at least a band 7.

View the contents of this package here.

Click here for a free sample corrected essay! 

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