This bundle includes both essay packages 1 and 2. Each essay package includes 10 essay documents (20 essay documents in total). 

Each document contains :

• The original essay by the student.

• Sam’s correction of the essay, including corrections of errors, suggestions for better language, explanations for the changes made, band scores and overall comments.

• The final version of the essay after all the corrections and suggestions.

The original essays are all between band 6.0. and 8.5., and the final versions of each essay are at least a band 7.

View the contents of package 1 here. 

View the contents of package 2 here.